I feel guilty showing you the marrige discussion scene only to tell you it’s too bad to keep; that seems rude. So here’s a discovery scene I will be keeping. I’ll cut the hell out of the first chunk of this, the stuff before Nita gets out of the shower, that’s just me following my nose again, but after that the scene works until the end. It needs an end. It’s also going to need tightened, of course, because it sprawls (discovery draft!) but once there are two people with conflict in the scene, it moves story and shows character change, so it’s legit.