I got the go ahead to do revisions on “Hot Toy.” So let’s talk about novellas in general and my about-to-be-spruced-up opus in particular.
What’s your big complaint about novellas?
What do you like about novellas/why do you buy them?
If you read “Hot Toy,” what’s your reaction (agree/disagree/whatever) to the following criticisms:
Lack of character development
Ridiculous, over the top plot.
Short on romance/no heat.
Unsympathetic characters: Trudy is shrill, Nolan is a jerk.
And general comments and suggestions also welcome, as always.