"Cold Hearts" 2: Brainstorming the Fix

So now there’s rough draft and it’s lousy but that’s okay because the rough draft is just the place I start. But now I have to ask myself some hard questions. Like “What the fuck is going on here? Why doesn’t she just give him the damn diamond? Is she an idiot?” Below are my notes on rereading twice during the next two weeks.

Okay, this is a mess, so let’s run the basic conflict box: Continue reading