Dreaming Blurbs (Rev.) (Rev. Again) (Rev Again)

I woke up this morning with one of those She/He blurbs in my brain. I have no idea, it’s not dreamwork, the last thing I did before I fell asleep was work a crossword. What was interesting about it, as I fought my way awake (very slow waker-upper here), was how it pointed out the weaknesses in the story. It’s not a good blurb, but evidently the Girls weren’t interested in good blurb, they were shrieking at me to fix my protagonist.

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Dissecting the Romance Blurb (Rev.)

After playing with Nita’s blurb yesterday–and thank you all for your help–I wanted to see how the last pass compared to the pros, so I went back to Saturday and Sunday’s Book Bub e-mails and pulled out the blurbs that had plots that were most like Nita’s. This is not to trash Book Bub’s blurb writing; as we found out yesterday, it’s damn hard to sell a story in fifty words. I just wanted to see what happened when I slotted Nita’s characters, identities, and basic plot into existing blurbs. Here’s what I got:

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It’s All in the Reflexes

I’ve been reading The Official Making of Big Trouble in Little China and finding it tremendously comforting. I bought the book because it’s about my favorite movie of all time, but I’m finding it comforting because it’s reminding me to swing as wide as I can while telling the best story I can, and then let go and let the Girls in the Basement take it from there.

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Cinderella Deal on sale $1.99

I always feel iffy about promoting my books on here. Sort of like shoving them at people at a party and saying, “Give me money!” OTOH, it’s two bucks. So . . .


The Cinderella Deal
by Jennifer Crusie
$1.99 / $11.99 (83% Off)
Will free spirit Daisy Flattery enjoy a happily ever after with her modern-day Prince Charming? After agreeing to pose as history professor Linc Blaise’s fiancée, she sure hopes so. Will these opposites attract or will Daisy be left before midnight? With 1,350 Goodreads.com ratings, you’ll want to read this magical story—with or without help from your fairy godmother.
Available on: Kindle, Nook, Google Play, iBooks, and Kobo

Warning: It’s from the 90’s so it’s dated.

(And thank you to Kelly for reminding me!)