This book is huge with a cast of thousands and five subplots plus, of course, a main plot. And as we all know, organization is not in my natural skill set. This leads me to do Act Blurbs.
You know what blurbs are, those pithy synopses on the back of the book that run something like “She’s a cop, he’s the Devil, they fight crime!” and right away you know what the book is about and if it’s your thing. So early on, I figured out that one way to break the progression of a book down was to give the acts titles. Then I remembered I’m bad at titles and went to one sentence blurbs. Like: Continue reading
I just got my four-week report from Grammarly. It said I wrote 344,940 words this month. A novel (according to my contracts) is 100,000 words. I wrote three and a half novels this month, evidently mostly in rewrites of the first part of Nita’s Act One (the only doc I’d uploaded), e-mails, texts, blog posts, and comments. What’s really weird is that I deleted the Grammarly app, so it’s become an invasive app, like butterfly bush, sneaking in everywhere. Continue reading
Bob Mayer used to make me walk the terrain of whatever novel we were writing (translation: go walk around the setting), and as much as I bitched about it, he was right, it really helps. So this morning I walked the terrain of Nita’s breakfast scene.
Yes, the same damn scene I’ve been trying to fix for months. It’s too long, it goes nowhere, it’s infodumpy (which I now have a new horror of after watching Justice League) and it’s annoying the hell out of me. But I need it there because it’s the first sober interaction between Nita and Nick, and it has to establish the foundation of the relationship. I have accepted that I have a vulnerability problem with Nick ( he’s dead, so he’s invulnerable) and I have realized that I need a much bigger end to the scene and fixed that,, but it’s still all over the place.
So since it takes place at breakfast in a diner, I went to breakfast at my diner and ate the terrain. Continue reading
Krissie e-mailed me this weekend and, among other things, asked me how Nita was going. Just having to sum up for her was extremely helpful, a progress report if you will. And it’s basically: Continue reading
I’ve often said that you can’t write a first scene until you’ve written the last scene, at least not a final write. You have to know where you’re going to know where to start from, know what happens in the final scene to introduce it in the first scene. So now that I’ve written the final scene (not finished the book, I just wrote that scene), I can go back to the first scene and do some of the massive cutting and shaping it needs. I’m looking at it in several ways, but the one that’s most crucial, I think, is seeing how it bookends..
First, I forgive John McCain for Sarah Palin.
So I’m doing some world-building in service of the plot, and I need some more business names. In particular, I need motel and B&B names. Inn Fernal and Motel Styx (again, thanks to Lorna) now play a big part, and I added luxury hotels The Deville and The Elysian, but I need a couple more motel names and a couple more B&B names would be good, too. Continue reading
So after much cogitation and wailing, I have a plot for Nita. It looks like this:
One of the weirdest things I discovered early in my career was that a story I’ve been writing on a screen not only looks completely different on the page, it reads completely different on the page.
That’s why a paper edit is crucial. Continue reading
No, not me, I’m pretty chipper here, getting plenty of sleep, beautiful day, everything’s fine.
I’m talking about exhausting my text by rewriting. Continue reading
The process of moving from a discovery draft (which is just writing to see what the story’s about) to a truck draft (which is an early draft that isn’t great but is probably good enough to publish if I get hit by a truck) is mostly about deconstructing a scene by beats to see what the hell is in there, and revising that to what’s supposed to be in there, once I’ve gotten a good overview of the act or entire book. I’ve done about a zillion drafts of the first breakfast scene, but they were all discovery drafts. It’s time to get serious about this sucker. For one thing, this scene over 3900 words and for another, it goes nowhere. it’s an overwritten, wandering, bloviating mess.
Here’s the rewrite analysis: