"Cold Hearts" 5: The Third Draft

So this is where we are now. It is by no means finished, nor are all of the problems fixed. The hero still isn’t on the page enough to be Courtney’s opposite number, for example. There are plot holes big enough to drive a truck through. The antagonist drifts which is never a good thing. If I ever write this novella, it’ll go through many more rewrites. But this is a good place to leave it until I get the rest of the novella done. Continue reading